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-title: Evaluation  --Week 4--
-description: Accessibility Need finding and Evaluation
+title: Evaluation  --Week 5--
+description: Accessibility Needfinding and Evaluation
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-# Week 4: Accessible Evaluation
+# Week 5: Accessible Evaluation
 
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@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ class:
 [//]: # (Outline Slide)
 
 # Learning Goals for Today
-- Presenting Accessibly
+- Presenting Acessibly
 - How to build inclusive experiment designs
 - Running an inclusive summative study
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ class:
 
 So you have an app and you think it's accessible. How do you check that? 
 
-.quote[...getting the big picture and assessing the overall experience of a finished product...] - Nielsen Norman Group
+.quote[Unlike formative evaluations, whose goals is to inform the design process, summative evaluations involve getting the big picture and assessing the overall experience of a finished product...] - Nielsen Norman Group
 
 Lots of variables here, but 
 - typically checks that an app works as expected on standard tasks when used by the target population
@@ -47,18 +47,6 @@ Lots of variables here, but
 
 ---
 
-# Why not Start with Formative User Testing?
-
-- Many of the apps we deploy are designed for people in general
-- Disabled people need to be able to use those apps too
-- Summative testing is the gold standard in assessing accessibility
-
-Of course the entire design process *should not just include majority class people* and much of this presentation applies to formative testing took
-
-We'll also cover that later this week when we talk about designing apps *for* and *with* people with disabilities
-
----
-
 # *Accessible* Summative User Testing
 
 - Accessibility doesn't come by accident when planning studies
@@ -71,48 +59,7 @@ Best guidance: [Nielsen-Norman Group](http://www.nngroup.com/reports/accessibili
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 # Accessible Study Planning Workflow
-
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-
-flowchart LR
-
-    A(Identify stakeholders)
-    B(Identify tasks)
-    
-    A <--> C
-    B <--> C
-    C <--> D
-    D <--> E
-	
-    subgraph Assign tasks
-    C(Access needs
-      Effects of familiarity
-      Personal preferences
-      Institutional constraints)
-    end
-
-    subgraph Plan Accomm.
-      D(Communication 
-             Materials 
-             Time
-             Space)
-    end
-
-    subgraph Reflect
-       E(Access Synergies
-         Access conflicts
-         Power Dynamics)
-    end
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+![:img A flow chart for planning accessible studies. The first two phases occur in parallel and are "identify stakeholders" and "identify tasks". These tasks flow into the "assign tasks" phase where one should consider access needs, effects of familiarity with the task, personal preferences, and other institutional constraints. The next phase is "planning accommodations", where one can consider the dimensions of communication, materials, time and space. And the final phase is reflect on the study plan while considering access synergies and conflicts and power dynamics.](img/wk04/access_workflow.png)
 
 
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@@ -125,55 +72,59 @@ Supposed you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app wit
 
 # Identify Stakeholders
 
-.left-column[you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app with people with sensory disabilities.]
+Supposed you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app with people with sensory disabilities.
+- Who are the stakeholders who you need to take into account for this study?
+
+---
 
-.right-column[
-Who are the stakeholders who you need to take into account for this study?
+# Identify Stakeholders
 
-  - Disabled participants (BVI, DHH)
+Supposed you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app with people with sensory disabilities.
+- Who are the stakeholders who you need to take into account for this study?
+
+  - Disabled participants
+    - Blind people
+    - Deaf people
+    - Hard-of-hearing people
   - Research team
-  	- Lua -- lead researcher, has dyslexia
-  	- Jay -- project team member, Deaf person who uses sign language.
-  	- El -- project team member, non-disabled
-]
+    - Lua -- lead researcher, has dyslexia
+    - Jay -- project team member, Deaf person who uses sign language.
+    - El -- project team member, non-disabled
+
 ---
 
 # Design Study
 
-.left-column[you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app with people with sensory disabilities.]
-.right-column[
+Supposed you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app with people with sensory disabilities.
 - Who are the stakeholders who you need to take into account for this study?
 - What is the right structure for the study?
-]
+
 ---
-# Design Study (1 of 5)
+# Design Study (1 of 4)
 
 This is a usability study, so it should include the same tasks as tested for users without disabilities
 
 Metrics should be similar as well -- for example the [System Usability Scale](https://www.usability.gov/how-to-and-tools/methods/system-usability-scale.html) might be useful at the end
 
 ---
-# Design Study (2 of 5) 
+# Design Study (2 of 4) 
 
 This is also a study of accessibility, with disabled users. The study design needs to consider 
-
+.left-column50[
 - Choice of method 
   - e.g. think aloud may be more difficult for a nonspeaking individual, or someone with fatigue
   - Check in on study measures and statistical design. Does user heterogeneity impact this?
 <!-- - Study venue (It may be difficult to duplicate participant hardware/software) -->
-
----
-# Design Study (3 of 5) 
-
-This is also a study of accessibility, with disabled users. The study design needs to consider 
-
+]
+.right-column50[
 - Ensure that participants' hardware/software also addresses study needs (e.g. do participants have a working monitor?)
 - Study length (estimate before and after piloting)
-   - Study length may increase for some disabled participants
+   - Study length may increase for some disabled participnats
    - Study length may negatively impact participants with fatigue-related concerns
+]
 
 ---
-# Design Study (4 of 5)
+# Design Study (3 of 4)
 
 Study metrics may also need revision.
 .left-column50[
@@ -184,25 +135,25 @@ Consider adding
 ]
 .left-column50[
 Consider changing
-- Any metrics that include ableist assumptions
+- Any metrics that include abelist assumptions
 - Approach to time based measurements
 ]
 
 
 ---
-# Design Study (5 of 5) 
+# Design Study (4 of 4) 
 
 It is also important to consider ethical issues
-
+.left-column60[
 - What responsibility do you have to participants in terms of providing skills and help in & out of study?
-- What responsibility do you have to give participants a participatory role in design?
 - How do you ensure the integrity of your record of their experience?
 - Are you compensating them appropriately and addressing costly transportation needs?
-
-???
+]
+.right-column40[
 These changes may in turn impact
 - Expense 
 - Scalability 
+]
 
 ---
 
@@ -218,17 +169,20 @@ Supposed you are hired to perform usability testing of new food-delivery app wit
 # Tasks List
 To perform standard usability testing on the app based on disabilities represented in sample
 
-1. Assign Tasks
-2. Train study team 
-3. Handle recruitment 
-4. Pilot with people with disabilities
-5. Run the Study
-6. Analyze the data
+1. Train study team 
+2. Handle recruitment 
+3. Pilot with people with disabilities
+4. Run the Study
+    - Prepare study materials (e.g., print out protocols)
+    - Hire access support staff
+    - Participate in the study
+    - Compensate participants
+5. Analyze the data
 
 ---
 --- 
 
-# 1. Assign Tasks
+# Assign Tasks
 - Consider:
 	- access needs
 	- effects of familiarity with the task
@@ -242,20 +196,19 @@ To perform standard usability testing on the app based on disabilities represent
 ---
 
 # Task Assignment List
-1. ~~Assign Tasks~~
-2. **Lua**: Train study team 
-3. **Jay**: Handle recruitment 
-4. **Jay**: Pilot with people with disabilities
-5. **Lua**: Run the Study
+1. **Lua**: Train study team 
+2. **Jay**: Handle recruitment 
+3. **Jay**: Pilot with people with disabilities
+4. **Lua**: Run the Study
     - **Lua**: Prepare study materials (e.g., print out protocols)
     - **Jay**: Hire access support staff
     - **Participants**: Participate in the study
     - **El**: Compensate participants
-6. **All**: Analyze the data
+5. **All**: Analyze the data
 
 ---
 
-# 2. Train study team (1 of 2)
+# 1. Train study team (1 of 2)
 
 As study lead, and a person with both disability and study related experience, Lua will train the study team. 
 
@@ -263,7 +216,7 @@ Her goal is to ensure that El and Jay are aware of best practices and considerat
 
 ---
 
-# 2. Train study team (2 of 2)
+# 1. Train study team (2 of 2)
 
 Some things they might discuss include
 - Ensuring that they address access needs and communication support from recruitment onward
@@ -274,19 +227,11 @@ Some things they might discuss include
   - When to help and when to end a task if participants have trouble
 ---
 
-# 3. Handle Recruitment (1/2)
-As a person already connected to the disability community, the team determines that Jay will be most likely to be trusted, and to identify opportunities to build trust throughout the recruitment process. 
+# 2. Handle Recruitment
+As a person already connected to the disability community, the team determins that Jay will be most likely to be trusted, and to identify opportunities to build trust throughout the recruitment process
 
-Recruitment raises a number of access issues
 - Are your recruitment materials accessible
-- How will you find participants (next slide)
-- How will you compensate participants?
-
----
-
-# 3. Handle Recruitment (2/2)
-
-Finding participants may require careful work
+- How will you find participants?
 - How much do you know about the group your are targeting and what to expect from/of them?
 - Will they see you as trustworthy? 
 - Are you giving them enough agency in the study process?
@@ -295,7 +240,7 @@ Finding participants may require careful work
   - Participants may see researchers as “just another professional, conducting professional surveillance”
 
 ---
-# 4. Pilot study
+# 3. Pilot study
 
 First, revisit accommodations plan
 
@@ -312,7 +257,6 @@ Prepare:
 - Hire interpreters (at least 2 weeks in advance)
 - Print out accessible study materials, consent form, etc
 - Set up the room
-- Have compensation ready
 ]
 
 ---
@@ -321,7 +265,7 @@ Prepare:
 - Lua gets tired from reading overtime
 - Jay knows ASL and Deaf norms
 - Study length was problematic for one Blind participant who also had a chronic illness
-- Sometimes sight lines made it hard for Jay to see the interpreter
+- Sometimes sightlines made it hard for Jay to see the interpreter
 
 ---
 
@@ -348,29 +292,16 @@ Prepare:
 
 ---
 
-# 5. Run the Study
+# 4. Run the Study
 
-At this point the team should be well prepared. However, it is still important to monitor both the team's and the participants' needs and adjust as accessibility concerns arise. 
-
-Similar to piloting a study 
+At this point the team should be well prepared. However, it is still important to monitor both the team's and the participants' needs and adjust as accessibility concerns arise.
 
 ---
 
-# 6. Analyze the Data 
+# 5. Analyze the Data 
 
 This is another area where access concerns may come up. 
 - Data analysis tools may not be accessible
 - Team members may have different needs with respect to written versus audio transcripts
 - <q>Member Checking</q>
 
----
-# (If time) Try it 
-
-You read about Alexa's use by people with disabilities in class. Form small groups
-- Identify potential tasks to test 
-- Write down a sampling goal (who is included)
-- Write down a list of accessibility assessment goals (metrics)
-- Identify potential accessibility concerns 
-
-Post on [Ed](https://edstem.org/us/courses/31170/discussion/2427390)
-