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 assigned: October 11th, 2023
 due: October 16th, 2023 (2 day grace period, October 18th, 2023)
    
-revised: August 20, 2023
+revised: October 10, 2023
 
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 * TOC
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ The goal of this homework is to learn about basics of website accessibility and
 
 ## Competencies
 This homework may contribute to your competency grade on 
-- Can apply web/app accessibility rules to understand and identify, including
+- Can apply web/app accessibility rules to understand conformance and identify violations on:
   1. whether content is perceivable
   2. whether content is operable 
   3. whether content is understandable
@@ -28,35 +28,37 @@ This homework may contribute to your competency grade on
   <!-- - 5 the meaning of conformance -->
 - Can use an accessibility checker to assess whether a web page or app is accessible
 - Can use an accessibility technology to find web page or app accessibility problems that are not found with an automated accessibility checker
-- Demonstrates familiarity with a range of accessibility technologies (at least 2)
+- Demonstrate familiarity with a range of accessibility technologies (at least 2)
 - Can articulate paths to addressing accessibility problems
 - Accessible written document creation
 - Image description
-- Your participation grade, as a percentage of completeness (are all the required parts present)
+- Your participation grade, as a percentage of:
+ - completeness (are all the required parts present)
+ - consistency: are you applying the skills you've learned so far consistently as relevant?
 
 ## Length & Difficulty
-Students in the past have reported that taken together, part 1 and part 2 of this assignment require a median of 20 hours (mode=6). A challenge that multiple students faced is summarizing the WCAG guidelines in their own words. Please be sure to do so, *or* to quote and reference WCAG guidelines according to our [course policy on academic conduct]({{site.baseurl}}/academic-conduct.html). Some things that students have told us about this assignment:
+Students in the past have reported that taken together, part 1 (assigned Oct 11) and part 2 of this assignment (assigned Oct 18) require a median of 20 hours (mode=6). A challenge that multiple students faced is summarizing the WCAG guidelines in their own words. Please be sure to do so, *or* to quote and reference WCAG guidelines according to our [course policy on academic conduct]({{site.baseurl}}/academic-conduct.html). Some things that students have told us about this assignment:
 - It helps to use the [UAR template](webegs/UAR_Template.doc) when filling out the UARS.
 - It was very motivating to do this for a real client
 
 Here is a [sample set of UARs](webegs/DDUARS.docx) that a prior student who completed this assignment has kindly shared with us for you to look at. 
 
 # Details
-Your goal is to generate a range of UARs documenting accessibility concerns (and perhaps successes) with a website or app. You will use [W3C guidelines](https://www.w3.org/WAI/standards-guidelines/) for the site or app you are assessing. 
+Your goal is to generate a range of UARs (Usability Aspect Reports) documenting accessibility concerns (and perhaps successes) with a website or app. You will use [W3C guidelines](https://www.w3.org/WAI/standards-guidelines/) for the site or app you are assessing. 
 
 The most relevant are probably [WCAG
 2.1](https://www.w3.org/WAI/standards-guidelines/wcag/glance/) and
 [How WCAG 2.0 Applies to
 Mobile](https://www.w3.org/TR/mobile-accessibility-mapping/) (even
 websites may be used in mobile settings). If you are working on a
-mobile app, you should also review this PDF (which is numbered page
+mobile app, you should also review this PDF (specifically page
 9): [Epidemiology as a Framework for Large-Scale Mobile Application
 Accessibility
 Assessment](https://xiaoyizhang.me/assets/Paper/ASSETS_2017_Epidemiology.pdf).
 
-Optional reading: [Its complicated: Negotiating Accessibility and
-(Mis)Representation in Image Descriptions of Race, Gender and
-Disability](https://guoanhong.com/papers/CHI21-ImageDescriptions.pdf)
+Optional readings:
+ - the Anatomy of the YouDescribe welcome page section of the [tutorial](https://youdescribe.org/support/tutorial)
+
 
 ## 0. Look over your assigned website and select 3 tasks
 You will be assigned to one of eight websites that were submitted by external organizations for review. Please see Canvas for your specific assignment group. Note that this is *not* a group project, we are asking you to individually work on your assigned website this week. You will join forces *next* week to write a report. 
@@ -85,7 +87,7 @@ You will need to select what aspect of this site to test, you should have at lea
 ## 1. Collect Data on  accessibility problems using an automated accessibility checker
 For each of these steps, you will record data about what you find so that you can complete the write up at the end.
 
-You should run the website and/or app through an accessibility checker. The WebAim accessibility checker, [WAVE](https://wave.webaim.org/), is a great choice for many sites. However, if the site requires that you log in, you may need an alternative. A great choice is the [Chrome plugin Axe](https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/axe-devtools-web-accessib/lhdoppojpmngadmnindnejefpokejbdd?hl=en-US). 
+You should run the website and/or app through an accessibility checker. The WebAim accessibility checker, [WAVE](https://wave.webaim.org/), is a great choice for many sites. However, if the site requires that you log in, you may need an alternative. A great choice is the [Axe Chrome plugin](https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/axe-devtools-web-accessib/lhdoppojpmngadmnindnejefpokejbdd?hl=en-US). 
 
 To install the Accessibility Scanner on android, search for it in the
 Play Store and install it on your device or emulator. The installation
@@ -98,10 +100,9 @@ page to get the scanner working on your device. Another option is to install the
 For iOS, you should install the Accessibility Inspector, which is freely available through the App Store. More details on [testing for accessibility in iOS.](https://developer.apple.com/library/archive/documentation/Accessibility/Conceptual/AccessibilityMacOSX/OSXAXTestingApps.html)
 
 ## 2. Collect Data on accessibility problems using TWO DIFFERENT accessibility technologies
-Use *multiple approaches*, including at a minimum  **a screen reader** and **magnification** to assess the website
-and/or app, and your ability to complete the assigned task using
-accessibility tools. You may also use other accessibility tools if you
-feel there are things that does not address, such as speech based input, or switch input.
+Use *multiple approaches*, including at a minimum  **a screen reader**, and an other AT to assess the accessibility of the website and/or app, and your ability to complete the assigned task using
+accessibility tools. The second AT you choose should provide different information than what a screen reader would. For example, using switch control or voice input are good second choices. However, using the tab key to navigate the website as the second AT is **NOT** considered for competency.
+You may also use other accessibility tools if 
 
 Here are some resources that may help you in gaining comfort with these accessibility technologies 
 - [Setting up a screen reader testing environment](https://www.sarasoueidan.com/blog/testing-environment-setup/)
@@ -111,13 +112,13 @@ Here are some resources that may help you in gaining comfort with these accessib
 - Advanced voice based input: [voice programming](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YKuRkGkf5HU)
 
 ## 3.  Record the data in a *Usability Aspect Report*
-Record each group of similar issues you find using this [Usability Aspect Report Template](webegs/UAR_Template.doc). Here is a [sample set of UARs](webegs/DDUARS.docx) that a prior student has kindly shared with us for you to look at. Make sure that your UARs are accessible. Be sure to include problems that you found with an automated tool *and* things that you could only find using manual testing with a screen reader or magnification or other accessibility technology.
+Record each group of similar issues you find using this [Usability Aspect Report Template](webegs/UAR_Template.doc). Here is a [sample set of UARs](webegs/DDUARS.docx) that a prior student has kindly shared with us for you to look at. Make sure that your UARs are accessible. Be sure to include problems that you found with an automated tool *and* things that you could only find using manual testing with a screen reader or other accessibility technology.
 
 Some key things to make note of: 
 - **Good or Bad Feature** *If your website as very accessible* you may include UARS for particularly good features 
-- **Source** including *your initials*; *the type of AT used*; and a unique ID such as JM-SR-3 (which means, approximately, Jennifer Mankoff Screen Reader UAR # 3)
+- **Source** including *your initials*; *the type of AT used*; and a unique ID. For example, JM-SR-3 (which means, approximately, Jennifer Mankoff Screen Reader UAR # 3).
 - **Name/Brief Description** Provide a very brief name/summary
-- **Evidence** Specify the guideline violated and provide a screen shot with ALT text or other evidence. 
+- **Evidence** Specify the guideline violated and provide a screen shot with ALT text or other evidence of the violation. 
 - **Explanation** Explain why this is a problem (or good aspect).
 - **Severity** Rank severity (with 4 being catastrophe) 
 - **Justification** Justify your ranking in terms of *frequency*, *impact* and *persistence*
@@ -125,5 +126,7 @@ Some key things to make note of:
 
 # Turnin
 
-- Submit your UARS as an attachment to the appropriate discussion as specified in Canvas. Specify the tasks you were testing in your submission. 
-- Also write an answer to this question: What are some examples of problems you could only identify with manual testing using an accessibility technology (instead of an automated tester)
+1. Submit your UARS (an accessible document that is not a PDF) as an attachment to the appropriate discussion as specified in Canvas. In addition to your UARs, this document should :
+ - Specify the tasks you were testing in your submission. 
+- An answer to this question: What are some examples of problems you could only identify with manual testing using an accessibility technology (instead of an automated tester)?
+2. Also upload this document as a file upload on canvas.
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 ## This is an important reminder
 ## Make sure zoom is running and recording!!!
 
+---
+# Announcements
+- Assignments posted on Ed
+- Use your own words in UARs, or quote and reference -- a reminder that citational justice is deeply connected to concepts in this class
+- Remember, skills aren't meant to be perfect on the first try, many of them take practice. That's ok!
+
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 # Learning Goals for Today
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 # Field Trip
 
+
 Try out [WebAIM for the UW Library](https://wave.webaim.org/report#/https://www.lib.washington.edu/)
 
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