diff --git a/assignments/technology-review.md b/assignments/technology-review.md
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--- a/assignments/technology-review.md
+++ b/assignments/technology-review.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ due:
    - Feb 7, 2023, 5pm Pacific
    - Two day grace period, Feb 9, 2023, due at the start of class
   
-revised: Jan 23, 2023
+revised: Feb 5, 2023
 
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@@ -23,7 +23,9 @@ This assignment will expose the class to a range of in-use accessibility technol
 
 ## 1. Select one example of second wave technology and read about it/try it
 
-Select an example of a so-called "second wave" technology, that you will *write* or *make a video* about. We have a couple of requests from community partners, and you can also select something based on interest. Once you select that technology, you should pick one paper to read deeply, and also try out some of accessible examples of the technology that are available now (you may need to search around to find these). The details of what you read, and try out, may vary with the topic you pick ad you can check with the instructors if you are unsure. 
+Select an example of a so-called <q>second wave</q> technology, that you will *write* or *make a video* about. Your goal is to  (1) summarize some accessibility research with that technology in plain language and then (2) give a survey of some common accessible solutions available today for people with disabilities who want to try the technology (here you can do more of a survey, links to actual available stuff is ideal)
+
+We have a couple of requests from community partners, and you can also select something based on interest. Once you select that technology, you should pick one paper to read deeply, and also try out some of accessible examples of the technology that are available now (you may need to search around to find these). The details of what you read, and try out, may vary with the topic you pick ad you can check with the instructors if you are unsure. 
 
 {% details Possible technologies %}
 Those marked with CA are *CREATE ASK* topics, i.e. topics that CREATE partners have asked us to provide them with content about. Those with MA are *Maybe Ask* topics, i.e. relevant to a community partner but not a direct ask. Essays on those topics may be shared more broadly in CREATE or partner publications.
@@ -41,15 +43,14 @@ Those marked with CA are *CREATE ASK* topics, i.e. topics that CREATE partners h
 
 ## 2. Write/Talk about the technology using plain language techniques
 
-Next, you should write or talk about the technology using the plain language techniques you learned in class. Your writeup should 
+You should write or talk about the technology using the plain language techniques you learned in class. Your writeup should 
 
 1. Describe the topic 
    a. Introduce the technology you focused on (1 paragraph)
    b. Summarize what might be important to know about the technology from a disability perspective (1-2 paragraphs), including things that can impact its accessibility
    
 2. Summarize what you learned about the topic from the research article. It is ok to mention more than one article, and we selected articles that complement each other. However, you are only *required* to summarize a single article. (4-5 paragraphs)
-3. Describe solutions and/or options available now to people with disabilities. For each one
-   a. Describe it briefly; Provide a link
+3. Describe solutions and/or options *available now* to people with disabilities. For each one, Describe it briefly; Provide a link
 4. Conclude by summarizing the key take aways
     
 Please note that if you choose to create a video, we cannot provide as